is this a good haiku poem for sesame street?
Saturday, March 13th, 2010 at
4:04 pm
Children play with them
School on television
123 sesame street
if not please give me some tips, it’d be really helpful, thank you(:
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Haiku is not just syllable count, this is really just three lines that tie in to the TV program, haiku would go much further, as would any good poetry.
It could use some work.Good luck
yes it is very good except the syllables are off…..
a haiku has 3 lines:
5 syllables in lines 1 and 3
7 syllables in line 2
work on that.
NO, the scheme is
5 syllables
7 syllables
5 syllables
For example,
Haiku’s are easy
But sometimes they don’t make sense
Refrigerator
yours is 5 6 7